Saturday, January 28, 2006

II: 028

dog tired --
if i had any laurels
i'd rest on 'em



Happy Chinese New Year!
Year of the Dog!

3 Comments:

At January 29, 2006 8:01 PM, Anonymous bill orlando said...

spelling bee
she spells the word
S-U-C-S-E-S-S


is this a senryu?


bill orlando.

 
At January 29, 2006 10:34 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Bill, since it ain't a haiku, I guess it is a senryu. Please don't ask me if it's a good senryu, 'cause I'm not sure I understand it.

 
At January 31, 2006 12:32 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Bill, ed markowski was kind enough to explain your senryu to me. (My mind has been particularly foggy and cranky lately). I like it.

Originally, I was focusing on whether substituting "s" for the second "c" in success, or substituting "sess" for "cess" had any special significance. And, nothing came to mind.

 

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