posted by david giacalone @ 11:55 PM
spelling bee she spells the word S-U-C-S-E-S-Sis this a senryu? bill orlando.
Bill, since it ain't a haiku, I guess it is a senryu. Please don't ask me if it's a good senryu, 'cause I'm not sure I understand it.
Bill, ed markowski was kind enough to explain your senryu to me. (My mind has been particularly foggy and cranky lately). I like it.Originally, I was focusing on whether substituting "s" for the second "c" in success, or substituting "sess" for "cess" had any special significance. And, nothing came to mind.
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david giacalone ("dagosan") looks at the foibles and ironies of the human condition, using poems structured like haiku but called "senryu", and with an occasional photo "haiga" (an image with a linked poem).
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