Saturday, January 28, 2006

II: 028

dog tired --
if i had any laurels
i'd rest on 'em



Happy Chinese New Year!
Year of the Dog!

4 Comments:

At January 29, 2006 8:01 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

spelling bee
she spells the word
S-U-C-S-E-S-S


is this a senryu?


bill orlando.

 
At January 29, 2006 10:34 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Bill, since it ain't a haiku, I guess it is a senryu. Please don't ask me if it's a good senryu, 'cause I'm not sure I understand it.

 
At January 31, 2006 12:32 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Bill, ed markowski was kind enough to explain your senryu to me. (My mind has been particularly foggy and cranky lately). I like it.

Originally, I was focusing on whether substituting "s" for the second "c" in success, or substituting "sess" for "cess" had any special significance. And, nothing came to mind.

 
At June 14, 2022 10:05 PM, Anonymous Walter said...

Thanks for sharing thiis

 

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