posted by david giacalone @ 11:38 PM
since you invited me back figuredi'd drop in. got a senryu below.happened today at mcree's barbershop in el paso...scissors in hand the barber talks about his new chainsawas far as senryu go, is this'nok?levon
Yes. I like it.Did I convince you that some rivers freeze over?
no sir. regardless of what you see,a river never really freezes.got a haiku for you snowbirds towarm up to... spring walk mother forgets her cane
Levon, Of course, the entire river doesn't freeze solid. But, for the purpose of a duck (or an ice-fisher) swimming across or walking across it certainly does freeze over.
well now in my estimation it's what's beneath the surface that really counts. i wouldn't take a chance on that ice, anymore than i'd stroll through a texas gully during a thunderstorm.up close my blonde lover's grey roots
"If we're walking on thin ice, then we might as well dance."Jesse Winchester, from "Do It"
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david giacalone ("dagosan") looks at the foibles and ironies of the human condition, using poems structured like haiku but called "senryu", and with an occasional photo "haiga" (an image with a linked poem).
. haiku advocate trying to keep a Beginner's Mind ... former lawyer-mediator...... editor of f/k/a weblog ... Born 1949, but a few body parts occasionally feel much younger.. . . a/k/a dagosan
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