- see "making windfarms eco-friendly neighbors" at f/k/a -
posted by david giacalone @ 11:23 AM
Hi, David,Enjoyed "simply senryu" very much.Could you tell the difference between a haiku flavored senryu and a senryu flavored haiku? I am kind of foggy.I like your "fallow field" haiku.This one is for you. fallow fieldit is the timeto take a nap:-) Yu
Thanks, Yu. Sometimes, there is no difference at all. And, if the blurry ones makes a reader or poet say, "gee, maybe this is straddling the line," I think that's a good thing. Come back again, after your nap.
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david giacalone ("dagosan") looks at the foibles and ironies of the human condition, using poems structured like haiku but called "senryu", and with an occasional photo "haiga" (an image with a linked poem).
. haiku advocate trying to keep a Beginner's Mind ... former lawyer-mediator...... editor of f/k/a weblog ... Born 1949, but a few body parts occasionally feel much younger.. . . a/k/a dagosan
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