Sunday, January 25, 2009

tilting at wind turbines




fallow field --
a scarecrow in the shadow
of wind turbines

- see "making windfarms eco-friendly neighbors" at f/k/a -

2 Comments:

At March 04, 2009 9:55 PM, Anonymous Yu Chang said...

Hi, David,

Enjoyed "simply senryu" very much.

Could you tell the difference between a haiku flavored senryu and a senryu flavored haiku? I am kind of foggy.

I like your "fallow field" haiku.

This one is for you.

fallow field
it is the time
to take a nap
:-)

Yu

 
At March 04, 2009 10:49 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Thanks, Yu. Sometimes, there is no difference at all. And, if the blurry ones makes a reader or poet say, "gee, maybe this is straddling the line," I think that's a good thing.

Come back again, after your nap.

 

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