Wednesday, December 21, 2005

I: 025 first day of winter

winter solstice
adolescent wiccans
flunk their spelling test

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a candle
in every window --
strangers light our path

3 Comments:

At December 21, 2005 7:46 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,

"adolescent wiccans?" flunking

a spelling test? is this a solstice

hallucination? i love this senryu.

it's so strange.

ed


winter solstice
the hardware out of
three way bulbs

 
At December 21, 2005 9:38 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Glad it tickled you, Ed. How about:

solstice party:
teen witches
can't even brew coffee

 
At December 22, 2005 7:33 AM, Blogger Eric said...

even tho 'adolescent wiccans' tickles my ironic bone . . . 'strangers light our path' i find works on a couple of levels. at first glance a deeply moving christmas-christian theme, on the other hand . . . people light their own windows for their own selfish reasons (decorative social look-at-me thinking) . . . lighting a stranger's path is an unintentional circumstance.

 

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