posted by david giacalone @ 1:38 PM
david,"adolescent wiccans?" flunkinga spelling test? is this a solsticehallucination? i love this senryu.it's so strange.ed winter solstice the hardware out of three way bulbs
Glad it tickled you, Ed. How about:solstice party: teen witchescan't even brew coffee
even tho 'adolescent wiccans' tickles my ironic bone . . . 'strangers light our path' i find works on a couple of levels. at first glance a deeply moving christmas-christian theme, on the other hand . . . people light their own windows for their own selfish reasons (decorative social look-at-me thinking) . . . lighting a stranger's path is an unintentional circumstance.
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david giacalone ("dagosan") looks at the foibles and ironies of the human condition, using poems structured like haiku but called "senryu", and with an occasional photo "haiga" (an image with a linked poem).
. haiku advocate trying to keep a Beginner's Mind ... former lawyer-mediator...... editor of f/k/a weblog ... Born 1949, but a few body parts occasionally feel much younger.. . . a/k/a dagosan
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