I: 025 first day of winter
winter solsticeadolescent wiccans
flunk their spelling test
...................
a candle
in every window --
strangers light our path
posted by david giacalone @ 1:38 PM
Wednesday, December 21, 2005
adolescent wiccans
flunk their spelling test
...................
a candle
in every window --
strangers light our path
david giacalone ("dagosan") looks at the foibles and ironies of the human condition, using poems structured like haiku but called "senryu", and with an occasional photo "haiga" (an image with a linked poem).
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. haiku advocate trying to keep a Beginner's Mind ... former lawyer-mediator...... editor of f/k/a weblog ... Born 1949, but a few body parts occasionally feel much younger.. . . a/k/a dagosan
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3 Comments:
david,
"adolescent wiccans?" flunking
a spelling test? is this a solstice
hallucination? i love this senryu.
it's so strange.
ed
winter solstice
the hardware out of
three way bulbs
Glad it tickled you, Ed. How about:
solstice party:
teen witches
can't even brew coffee
even tho 'adolescent wiccans' tickles my ironic bone . . . 'strangers light our path' i find works on a couple of levels. at first glance a deeply moving christmas-christian theme, on the other hand . . . people light their own windows for their own selfish reasons (decorative social look-at-me thinking) . . . lighting a stranger's path is an unintentional circumstance.
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