Thursday, April 13, 2006

II: 067

all-nighter --
not the fun kind

Spring hormones surge --
the shopgirl asks
if i have grandkids


At April 19, 2006 5:05 AM, Blogger Tim S said...

"Deflating" comes to mind - when I consider the shopgirls' comments. Also a nice twist. I recently have tried my hand at a few senryu - I would love your feedback - they're mixed in with some haiku - I hope the difference is apparent.


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