August 31st is "Love Litigating Lawyers Day"
posted by david giacalone @ 1:09 PM
david,nice senryu. send it to al.revised the labor day piecei emailed earlier... Labor Day the wal-mart greeter's frozen smiletalk to ya later
Hi, Ed. Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to this site to respond to you -- I'm out of the habit of checking out this dusty old weblog. I'm glad you like "snack room," and (as I've told you by email), your Labor Day wal-mart senryu is a winner. As we/ve discussed, the changing of one word can make a very big difference. In my opinion, adjectives in senryu should describe rather than ascribe.
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david giacalone ("dagosan") looks at the foibles and ironies of the human condition, using poems structured like haiku but called "senryu", and with an occasional photo "haiga" (an image with a linked poem).
. haiku advocate trying to keep a Beginner's Mind ... former lawyer-mediator...... editor of f/k/a weblog ... Born 1949, but a few body parts occasionally feel much younger.. . . a/k/a dagosan
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