Tuesday, December 06, 2005

I: 010

this is how
Elvis died --
mental note: eat more fiber

2 Comments:

At December 06, 2005 5:23 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,

the senryu here are very good,

"cute waitress" is great.

ed

arguement
both men wearing
mirror shades

 
At December 06, 2005 5:52 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,

by the way, the senryu above has

nothing to do with our discussion

last night. i was atthe grocery

store today, and these two guys

were arguing in the parking lot.

6 above zero, and they're going

at it. both were wearing mirrored

sunglasses. i felt like thanking

for the "moment," but figured i'd

better get the bread and go home.

ed


arguement
between outbursts
chattering teeth

 

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